This is a great piece of writing and I'm glad the Night Zookeeper manages to solve the problem in the end.
I am always losing things but I've never had a problem with anything quite so big or important as an animal go missing.
Keep up the great writing!
I would love to go to a zoo where there was a pegasus! I certainly hope Ally was OK after getting eaten by the dragon! Remember that new speakers get a new line when you are using direct speech. I really like your blog!
MR Paul Huebl (Team 100WC)
Year 6 Teacher
I'm Isabelle, and I'm in fourth grade. I live in New Jersey, USA. I love to write!
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